Adeliss's Realization

EDIT 02/13/2013: Following some advice from the amazing , I did a bit of rearranging, recoloring and resizing of the text to make it easier to read without getting eye strain. It probably still needs to be downloaded to be read easily, but it should at least be quite a bit better than before, I hope.

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This is what happens when I actually manage to start writing a story. THIS. I end up wanting to illustrate it. ...I'm actually quite proud of this~... Even if it doesn't make much sense at all if I don't explain... Well, I'll only explain stuff if people ask, since I'm not really in the mood for rambling like I usually do... Everything except Adeliss there in the top-right corner is some sort of flashback of his, whether it's snatches of journal entries or speech... They're color-coded:

Blue/cyan = Adeliss
white/black calligraphy font = Zantro
black arial on the far right = an old man
white/pale-grey Old English next to the hooded person = one of the Council Heads(?)/a high-ranking member of the Scholar's Council
red = ??? (Oh, who am I kidding, it's Carter. )
various shades of gold = ???'s journal entries (not Carter.)

The bottom-right text is purposely obscured, hehe~. Notice the part where a few letters can be made out that looks like "Zantro"?

Psssst! This is where Zantro got his name from post-becoming-an-asshat! His actual name is Cereus ( [link] ) Sancturo-Lunvell.

my characters, my story, no stealing please!